Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Character in Conflict

In the novel Lolita, a middle-aged man by the name of Humbert Humbert has an odd fascination for young girls, preferably pre-teenagers. He often fantasizes about them whenever he sees one around and desires to have one. Humbert is sexually frustrated because he knows that it is morally wrong and socially unacceptable to be intimate with a young girl who is twenty-plus years younger than he is. Thus, Humbert finds himself in conflict between satisfying his strong desires and keeping with acceptable social standards.

            Humbert was always unhappy because he often fantasized about being intimate with young girls. He tried to cover up this strong desire by going to whore houses and having intimate relationships with women his age. He found pleasure in watching little girls (whom called nymphets) and engaged in sexual wishful thinking.

            One day, he took rent in a woman’s house and she had a nymphet daughter, Dolores Haze. From the moment Humbert saw her, he was attracted to her and tried as hard as he could to be with her. He called her his Lolita and eventually came to find that she was attracted to him too. This was a turning point for him because he finally had a chance to turn his fantasies into reality.

            Of course, Humbert had to carefully plan every day of his life with Lolita to make sure their relationship was kept a secret. Humbert had married Lolita’s mom just to have a reason to be near her. When Lolita’s mom died, they went road tripping across the country as “father and daughter.” But at the hotels they stayed at, they would engage in sexual activities.

            For a time, Humbert was confident that he wouldn’t get caught. He made sure that she was never out of his sight and that she didn’t talk with other men or boys. He was elated that he finally got to fulfill his desires with a nymphet. That is, until Lolita started acting suspicious with him and taking advantage of him, only doing intimate things with him if he paid her or if she felt like it. Humbert was aware that she was acting obnoxious and began to feel insecure because she would often flirt with other guys or disappear on her own.

            Eventually Humbert found himself at a bad fate because Lolita disappeared and ran off with another older man. He later found her pregnant with yet a different guy’s baby and she tried to take advantage of him by asking him for money. Corrupted and heartbroken. Humbert turned himself into jail, where he wrote his entire account in a journal.


26 minutes.

7 comments:

  1. This book sounds interesting, how was it?
    Don't forget to mention the author. :D
    The conflict in the introductory paragraph is very strong, but don't forget to answer the prompt and not just summarize the book. In each of your other paragraphs try to emphasize or at least reiterate why whatever is happening is a conflict against society.
    The flow is beautiful, and I think the conclusion could be a bit stronger. Your introduction was very strong though, just make sure you follow through with your support and explanatory paragraphs.

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  2. I thought your introduction was very strong and captivating; it really grabbed my interest while simultaneously presenting a strong argument. However, I felt that toward the end you started to summarize the book a little too much. Make sure you only provide enough summary to support your argument. Other than that I thought it was great. You make the book sound so interesting!

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  3. This sounds super interesting and your summary made me wanna read it really badly! The introduction was super good and really clear about the conflict and it lost a litttlee direction throughout, but I think if you tied it more together at the end it would be perfect cas I think its pretty clear by just summarizing that his actions were in conflict with the rest of society. I thought it was superrr good and really interesting!

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  4. The intro was great in that it clearly and directly stated how the novel was related to the prompt. The intro explains how this character was in conflict with his society morally and socially, and while the examples do support this, it might help to just connect back to this conflict throughout the essay just to make the examples relation to the prompt more obvious. I enjoyed reading your essay =D It was to the point and engaging from the very beginning.

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  5. WOW, this is one sick book. I feel that you could've made your prompt more engaging, as it was mostly straightforward and there wasn't really a tension, ya know? But the way you wrote Hubert's character was really well done since even I felt disgusted by his actions, so great job on that!

    -Jhay

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  6. This is an..um...interesting sounding book. lol...but yea i think you're an awesome writer but i didn't see any connection with the prompt. I'm impressed that you timed yourself and know you'll be great on the exam. Just remember to connect the events of the book to what the prompt is asking. Good job :)

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  7. This book sounds interesting. I like how you had the 26 minutes on the bottom too. Was that for 26minutes to write the prompt? I think that I would like to read this book! Anyways, this is a good summary of the book, but next time only have a little bit of a summary! However i like the connection you made that he is like in his own world and everything. Good job :]

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